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Depths Of My Heart


The Depths of My Heart
Holding immense of varying emotions
Running inside through these veins
Causing Terrible IMPACT all over
Controlling over my Li’l Brain.
Sometimes very happy,
Sometimes that much sad
While, Sometimes in love,
Sometimes in agony,
And even sometimes very mad. 😛
Thoughts revolving around
Hovering all the time.
Even inspiring me so much from anybody
And making to try to be like them for a while.


The Depths of My Heart
Makes me just like a Soldier
Who Plays with Death
Standing One Step Closer
Getting bruises and scars all around
Still Unstoppable to take a Break
Seeking for peace
And Fighting for Independence
Even putting his life in Stake
He hates Tyranny and Slavery
And Gives a F*ck to Terrorism
Only thing he believes in
Blood and Sweat form Patriotism
Everybody wanna be like him
Wanna be like that BRAVE
Would get ready for a Sacrifice
And die happily in The Holy Grave


The Depths of My Heart
Makes me just Like a Man
To hold himself with a Belief
Conquering all the damn strength
To move out from his own GRIEF
Having a Duel with The Mighty Satan
Like a Big “DABANGG” (Fearless Guy) 8) 😉
Without having any Fear
And even, without having any doubt
N’ putting his all power
To whip all those DAMN threats
That tried to take him out.


The Depths of My Heart
Makes me just Like a Friend
Who never forgets you till the End
And, he’s the one who never pretends.
Sharing his thoughts with you
Giving you happiness in every Moment
To maintain his Friendship
at every sort of aspect
Even would do anything for his friend
with Hustle Loyalty n’ Respect 😉


And, Finally
The Depths of My Heart
Now, makes me just Like a Lover
Whose LOVE just grown in Rain
Like a Blooming Flower
Getting fascinated to somebody
Ain’t any sort of Lust? 😛
Looking to that beautiful
Ohh Baby !! It makes him to Blush
Thinking about her anywhere
Many Shitty things in his head get flush
And It seems like, He’s like Y’all
Who finally had a sweet CRUSH.


These are certain thoughts
That usually lies in my Yard
And I am still embracing the FACT
I won’t break, cut n’ torn them apart
Whatever they might be
Even else if it sometimes
Makes me Feel bit Retard 😛
Coz’ these things would and forever
Inside The Depths of My Heart. 😉


All the Thoughts of Mine would be lying inside The Depths of My Heart

Selected for :- Thursdays Poet Rally Week 34 By Jingle

Thanks Jingle for giving me “Perfect Poet Award for Thursdays Poet Rally Week 34”

Moreover, I would like to nominate Dr. Madan Goyal for Week 35


63 responses

  1. A++

    Thanks for linking, welcome back!

    May 2, 2011 at 07:50

    • Glad to know, you still remind me !!

      May 2, 2011 at 07:52

  2. Wonderful poem!

    February 28, 2011 at 19:39

  3. wow..

    February 2, 2011 at 08:32

  4. Heyy man .. Nice Info ..
    I liked it so much .. Keep Postin’ !!

    December 18, 2010 at 03:09

    • And you Keep Commenting !!

      December 18, 2010 at 15:50

      • thanks for sharing, you rock.


        February 1, 2011 at 21:58

      • Thanks ..

        February 2, 2011 at 15:30

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  6. Hey- thanks for coming by
    I appreciate your visit!

    December 13, 2010 at 23:48

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  8. An homage to the heart and its ways. Just wonderful. Thank you. Well done and I enjoyed it.

    Here from Rally. Hope you enjoy your visits and visitors.

    Poem on …

    December 7, 2010 at 09:30

  9. Thanks for commenting on my piece. I really enjoyed this one. The depths of our hearts can hold so many things. You did a great job expressing them here.

    December 6, 2010 at 22:13

  10. somewhere else

    poignant and meaningful, thank you

    December 6, 2010 at 16:56

  11. Beautiful thoughts presented here..loved your poem. Happy rallying 🙂

    December 5, 2010 at 10:47

  12. Very emotional and vivid poem. Keep sharing your thoughts with the world!

    December 5, 2010 at 04:41

    • Ya sure .. why not .. same for you as well 😉

      December 5, 2010 at 09:51

  13. Very nice, from the depths of my heart is very raw and powerful. It is a good thing mine is nice and jet black! Thanks for sharing with us

    December 5, 2010 at 00:44

  14. The Depths of your heart are indeed immense…enjoyable read.

    December 4, 2010 at 23:48

  15. Woven powerfully with such emotion and imagery. Great job!


    December 4, 2010 at 21:11

  16. A.B. Thomas

    A powerfully written piece!

    December 4, 2010 at 21:05

  17. ladynimue

    Most interesting and innovative !! one of the best read of this week 🙂

    December 4, 2010 at 21:02

    • Aww !! Thanks for such a nice compliment !!

      December 5, 2010 at 09:50

  18. Anita Wakeham (Aquarius63)

    Profound words with a beautiful layout.


    December 4, 2010 at 19:28

  19. Thoughts in mind are endless
    Depth of your hert is marvelous
    Every body thinks continously
    To express in universal way really
    is an art well mastered by you
    Let your thoughts bring peace to you.

    Very well written.
    Thanks for the nomination.
    I really feel honored.
    I am sorry, but I don’t understand what this nomination means to me.
    I write in blog purely for fun. Being a practicing surgeon may not be available for any duties.

    December 4, 2010 at 16:22

    • Thanks Doc. for such nice compliments
      Well about nominations, It’s just a way to appreciate and promote others’ works !!

      December 4, 2010 at 19:01

  20. Stong poetry. Good images. Thanks! and thanks for visiting me, too!

    December 4, 2010 at 16:00

    • TY .. Do check my other Blog Posts as well !! 😉

      December 4, 2010 at 19:02

  21. Ina

    Good strong poem!

    December 4, 2010 at 15:58

  22. nice one.. straight from the heart.. 🙂
    regards~ Sayandeep

    December 4, 2010 at 13:46

  23. Straight from the heart….great..:)
    Regards~ Sayandeep

    December 4, 2010 at 13:45

  24. congratulations!! and it is just a sweet poem, perfect poem by a perfect poet 🙂

    December 4, 2010 at 12:22

    • Awww !! So sweet of you !!
      But I ain’t that perfect by the way 😛

      December 4, 2010 at 19:03

  25. has very much depth 🙂
    awesome poetry!

    December 4, 2010 at 09:49

  26. What a wonderful tribute to all the ways a heart can feel. This was wonderful and your writing so sincere.

    I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

    December 4, 2010 at 09:42

    • Well, I’ve focussed on what generally everybody’s heart feels or should feel ..
      It’s kinda TRIBUTE to them .. like u’ve mentioned already !!

      December 4, 2010 at 19:04

  27. Awesome and cool music.. never read something like that. 🙂 Superb !!

    December 4, 2010 at 09:12

    • TY .. Do check my other Blog Posts related to some issues in my opinion as well !! 😉

      December 4, 2010 at 19:05

  28. love your poems ty for sharing… your a great writer 🙂

    December 4, 2010 at 08:11

  29. thoughtsnotlost

    I really enjoyed the playful quality of this poem. Serious, yet not at the same time. You painted a very complete portrait with words.

    December 4, 2010 at 01:36

  30. Very well written…
    Thank you 🙂

    December 3, 2010 at 19:18

  31. Sam373

    “These are certain thoughts
    That usually lies in my Yard
    And I am still embracing the FACT
    I won’t break, cut n’ torn them apart
    Whatever they might be
    Even else if it sometimes
    Makes me Feel bit Retard”, YEA,that is how I sometime feel.

    December 3, 2010 at 02:57

  32. hello love! Happy Rallying! 🙂 i like this alot, its epic. all the diff emotions and feelings intertwined with real human p.o.v. as well as a lil humor. a perfect read! nice penning!

    December 2, 2010 at 19:00

    • Heyy Thanks for your kind comments

      December 2, 2010 at 19:39

  33. Amazingly written, everything lies within the depth of our hearts, there are bound to be something we cannot spoken of or reveal, your words are great =) Will be looking forward for more ^^~

    December 2, 2010 at 17:20

    • Totally agreed with your views !!
      That’s was kinda universal thoughts which comes in everybody’s mind !!

      And By The Way, such Universal things would be available on this Universal Blog !! 😉

      December 2, 2010 at 17:34

  34. its heavy…if i try to understand the depths of my heart…i would surely be lost…i liked this..

    December 2, 2010 at 15:09

    • Heyy It’s not that hard BTW
      Even You could write something on the topic i’ve imagined !!

      !! BEST OF LUCK !! 8)

      December 2, 2010 at 17:31

  35. You wrote this poem so well…nice one.


    December 2, 2010 at 04:36

  36. Jingle

    vivid and beautiful imaginations…

    a job well done,
    Thanks for sharing it with poets rally.
    Happy Thursday!
    u rock!
    Glad to have you back this week.

    December 2, 2010 at 02:06

    • Thanks for adding me so earlier …
      I was just about to inform you once again !!

      December 2, 2010 at 08:10

    • even I’m so glad to return at here !!

      December 2, 2010 at 17:36

  37. Mase Da Rula

    after reading this… I feel like I’ve been beaten over the head with a club called emotions… geez… you spilled them out beautifully…. and intense… I felt every one…

    great piece

    .Mase Da Rula.
    The Ruler’s Kingdom

    December 2, 2010 at 00:27

    • Awww !! so Sweet of You Brother !! 😉

      December 2, 2010 at 08:11

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  39. Our little hearts do go through so much 🙂 nicely done!

    December 1, 2010 at 22:13

    • Gee thanks !!
      Your poetry is also cool !!

      December 1, 2010 at 22:44

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  41. Very cool poem and blog! I like the music.

    November 28, 2010 at 09:26

  42. You have so much in the depths of your heart…varied emotions, feelings, longings, revulsions, and what not…happy, painful, joyful…they reside…

    This is a heavy poem…you have touched so many aspects of existence which the heart is the core of it all…Very well written…now I found another great poet/poetess in you…

    Thanks for visiting my blog and whenever you do, always leave a link of your new post and I will surely come visit you..

    Btw, your blog is beautiful…I like it, even the color, and the background music in it!
    Keep sharing, keep writing, keep loving… 🙂


    Amity 🙂

    November 26, 2010 at 03:16

    • Thanks for your nice compliments about my Blog n’ my Post ..
      N’ Sure why not sharing ?? I would do so for sure next time as well .. 😉

      November 26, 2010 at 07:54

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