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The DEMOCRATIC Rap

For The People, Of The People, By The People !!

What I used to say,
is what you’ve just said,
Even every single Indian
also just said this SHIT so,
that we all are living
in a DEMOCRATIC NATION
Giving some place to
Brotherhood and Friendship
Keeping out all sort of
Racism and Discrimination.
Promoting ans spreading all over
Education and Employment
and, giving a Big F*CK

to Terrorism and Destruction.

Indian Democracy

But if it so, then
Why still we’re iving
in this Curious Age?
where’d our ‘Golden Bird’ has gone
out from its Precoius Cage ?
Why the HELL there is
so much Violence all around?
Why people are in Rage?
and even a Big Question,
What happened to our Nation ?
Why is it on Demolishing Stage ?

Demolition

This is the DAMN Reality,
I’m not talking out from gravity,
Don’t feel pity now for my country
Don’t even think I’m so much ‘Senti’
Now see, what I regularly see,
is what you’ve regularly ignored,
just read it DAMN carefully,
Otherwise, you’ll get Bored.

Election Posters

Watched loads of annoying Stuffs
on these large WALLS OF DEMOCRACY
People sticking Posters everyday
of countless Corrupt Cons
Even if they not done with it,

They would probably Piss it on,
My mind blasts like Volcano
after Watching Such Dirty art,
even making my Heart torned apart.

Pissing on the Walls

Can’t even move my steps freely
on the FLOORS OF DEMOCRACY
where now-a-days,
Richies torchuring their Poor Slaves
showing their DAMN Dominance
Taming them like Animals
Tying them with Hose
Making them even to feel so much
Forcing them to rub their nose

Slavery in India

Our lives keeps moving fastly
on these buzy STREETS OF DEMOCRACY
While the poor slum kids
still moving on barefoot
struggling whole day and night
Picking up all our dirts and,
Begging for some Money
just for getting some piece of food.

Slum Kids on Streets

We are still not done yet,

We are also the Biggest Convicts,
For polluting the SOIL OF DEMOCARCY
Every Young Plant and Old Tree
Getting detached from its roots
Showing No Mercy to Greenary,
And therefore, making it so Unholy.

Deforestation

What I am right now
is what we all have become,
We are not humans anymore
We’re only mere Slaves of SATAN,
As we’ve done a lot harm so far
That always used to be forbidden,
Setting many Riots with a Rage
Putting This World on an ARMAGEDDON,
And just committing all The 7 Deadly Sins
For which Forever we all are Unforgiven.

The Unholy and Mighty Satan

What i wanna see,
is what you should see

We would be dreaming a New Nation,
in which what you really believe.

Spread Education

Neither bills nor posters everywhere,
I don’t see any Corrupt Faces
Just sum blackboards hangin’around
to spread and promote ‘Education’
with some Li’l Bit of Grace
on the WALLS OF DEMOCRACY

Holding Hands Together

Neither Dominance nor Slavery
Every Single Richie and Every Single Poor
are now allied together and forever,
walking with a fearless pride
without any sort of subjection
over the FLOORS OF DEMOCRACY

Plant a Tree

No more Slumdogs in the corner
Not even a place for Smokes to hover
People using Cycles and CNGs these days
and even Planting some more Trees
to make the place beautiful,
to look Cleaner and Greener and,
to reduce ‘Pollution’ forever
on these STREETS OF DEMOCRACY.

Green City

The Young plants of India
Aspiring now to be a big tree one day,
Getting a pure guarantee of ‘Employment’
and holding their strong grips,
won’t leave their Native fellows
to eradicate this ‘Brain Drain
and finally, making The Holy SOIL OF DEMOCRACY


Moreover,
I don’t wanna get to see

any kind of Western Cultural Invasion,
neither Corruption nor Over-population,
not even Lethal Massive Demolition.
and therefore, such whole things coming together
gives me a Sense of Satisfaction,
that I am living proudly,
in my LARGEST DEMOCRATIC NATION.

The Democratic Nation
!! Jai Hind !!

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Selected for :- Thursdays Poet Rally Week 35 By Jingle

Thanks Jingle for giving me “Perfect Poet Award for Thursdays Poet Rally Week 38”

Moreover, I would like to nominate Olivia for Week 35

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47 responses

  1. Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.
    xoxox

    December 20, 2011 at 18:33

    • Thanks Ji, I’m just writing on a New Poetry.
      Just launching it at the end of the Year.

      December 20, 2011 at 22:06

  2. You highlight so many important issues. Powerful and it has a flow about it like a rap song. Great job!

    June 15, 2011 at 15:07

    • Thanks for your appreciation !!! 😉

      June 16, 2011 at 01:05

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  6. Silvertongue

    Amazing! Powerful words to convey powerful emotions. Amazing!

    February 23, 2011 at 07:07

  7. Silvertongue

    Powerful words to convey a strong message! I absolutely love it!

    February 23, 2011 at 07:06

  8. gracefulglider

    wow wow wow!!! WOW!!!

    Great piece right there. Do you perform your poetry?

    February 22, 2011 at 08:27

    • ya .. kind of !! but not like a PRO !!

      February 22, 2011 at 20:24

  9. Ashish, I love this one a lot.. The way you started, the pics, the cow, the poster, and everything touched my heart.. Thanks for this…

    Someone is Special

    February 20, 2011 at 11:10

    • Thanks for the appreciation Sir !!

      February 20, 2011 at 13:26

  10. powerfulll…!!!! thats all i can sAY..!!
    thanks for stopping by mine..

    February 20, 2011 at 10:34

    • Thanks for the appreciation !!

      February 20, 2011 at 13:22

  11. Powerful words Ash, true as well. If you want an answer to your second stanza then listen to Faithless’ “Mass destruction” he says why the world is as it is. “Inaction is a weapon of mass destruction”. The reason we are as we are is because we only talk about it, we nevr actually DO anything to change anything.
    The Lonely Recluse.

    February 20, 2011 at 03:20

    • That’s a nice perception actually …
      but everybody should do it because I am not a 1 Man Army.
      The Motive behind through my Stuff is to realize of our Inaction towards The World ..
      and Hopefully, that day comes very soon !! 8)

      February 20, 2011 at 08:39

  12. Powerful words and a very powerful message.

    February 19, 2011 at 22:29

  13. strong words… It takes a lot of courage to express what you really feel… Strong emotions put here. I hope your beautiful wishes will come true 😉

    February 19, 2011 at 20:06

    • Ya .. Let’s see .. what next !!

      February 19, 2011 at 20:59

  14. Ina

    There is a lot of passion for your goal here and very well said.

    February 19, 2011 at 15:34

  15. Two things…
    1. awesome wordplay
    2. very strong emotion

    You nailed it! Fantabulous job!

    Cha
    http://chaspalette.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/the-bitter-end/

    February 19, 2011 at 12:26

    • Gee thanks for the compliment !!

      February 19, 2011 at 14:00

  16. Kevin Lamb

    Way to rage with words!

    February 18, 2011 at 01:13

  17. This is an awesome piece for a poetry slam. You just killed it, and with that pic of the rock there, you had me scared…

    nice job, kudos!!!! 🙂
    Happy rally!

    February 17, 2011 at 22:51

    • LoL ..
      by the way .. with this pic .. I’m making my Blog as ..
      THE MOST ELECTRIFYING BLOG IN THE BLOG UNIVERSE 😛

      Hopefully, that day comes soon ..
      Thanks anyways for appreciating my Rap 😉

      February 17, 2011 at 22:56

  18. Thanks for sharing these with poets rally.

    powerful demonstrations.

    Cheers.
    🙂

    February 17, 2011 at 20:52

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  20. you really have a dream and i like it! here’s my week 38 potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/

    February 17, 2011 at 13:13

  21. Nice Stuff .. Brilliant

    February 5, 2011 at 06:55

  22. Oh…intense and powerful, Ash!!! I kinda share your sentiment here… democracy ain’t just a word.. there’s a lot more to it than just elections and power play!!!

    Good one, my friend!

    February 3, 2011 at 03:04

    • oh.. and by the way, the lines
      “Now see, what I regularly see,
      is what you’ve regularly ignored,” — struck me as AWESOME!!!

      February 3, 2011 at 03:07

      • Thanks for the nice compliments

        February 3, 2011 at 17:13

  23. A.B. Thomas

    A great read and from what I’ve been reading in the India forums you indeed are a voice of what the masses so wish though through the annals of those elected it falls upon deaf ears.

    February 2, 2011 at 08:00

  24. Very interesting, and a frank, open and honest appraisal of what is happening in your large and diverse society and Nation.

    Thank you as well for visiting my site! I look forward to exchanging and sharing our poetry and viewpoints in the coming days, week, months – dare I say years? 😀

    I wish you enough. . .

    Paula

    February 1, 2011 at 19:57

  25. Very touching- good work here.. 🙂
    Keep it up, very well thought of!!

    Hugs xx

    February 1, 2011 at 19:31

  26. Hi Ashish
    Short comings are present throughout the universe.

    Publicizing these does not serve any purpose.

    Better to rectify the same and lead by action.

    February 1, 2011 at 19:26

    • Poetry part is fantastic of course.

      February 1, 2011 at 19:32

      • Thanks for the appreciation Doc 😉

        February 2, 2011 at 15:31

  27. thanks for the explanations…

    it is best that you share this one now with potluck to get better review…

    I am not familiar with your culture, forgive me.

    January 31, 2011 at 08:05

    • It’s OK ..
      I didn’t minded by the way !!
      Well add this 1 even in .. Thursday Poets Rally Week 38 .. as well if u can .. 😉

      January 31, 2011 at 18:14

  28. Thanks for sharing a lovely piece related to the theme…

    7 deadly sins?
    wow.

    powerful pieces.
    A++

    January 27, 2011 at 20:09

    • Actaully .. It was on The Current Democracy in India ..
      where eventually, We the Democrats of the Nation, are committing some of the 7 Deadly Sins ..
      Hope You’ve got me .. now !!!

      and thanks for the appreciations !! 😉 ^_^

      January 27, 2011 at 20:13

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