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Eyes (Day 6 of Haiku)

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Mysterious Eyes,
tells the Truth from Thousand Lies
The Strength of Vision.

Mysterious Eyes

Mysterious Eyes

 

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This Haiku Post is a part of “ The Haiku Challenge “A 28 day Haiku Writing Competition,
organized by ‘Someone Is Special’.

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24 responses

  1. brilliantly captured the beauty of those eyes.

    February 9, 2011 at 12:54

  2. iblogmoore

    very mysterious loved this one!

    February 8, 2011 at 05:57

  3. Nice Haiku. I love the second line very telling…

    February 7, 2011 at 23:55

  4. This is one of your best so far !

    February 7, 2011 at 19:43

  5. i love the second line!! 😀 😀

    lovely haiku 🙂

    February 7, 2011 at 15:40

  6. You’re right…there is a sense of mystery about those eyes.

    February 7, 2011 at 03:34

    • I knew it .. coz everybody agree with the FACT !! 😛

      February 7, 2011 at 18:34

  7. well put.
    cheers,

    February 7, 2011 at 02:14

  8. Well done, but tell the truth from lies? I’ve been trying to do that my whole life. The ladies conceal their deceptions well. Nothing we can do about it: it’s genetic.

    February 6, 2011 at 21:42

    • That’s actually .. Human Nature !! 😛

      February 7, 2011 at 18:32

  9. Lovely haiku, says a lot in so few words.

    February 6, 2011 at 21:03

  10. Fabulous ashish! the second line is beautifully crafted..keep it up ! 🙂

    February 6, 2011 at 18:47

    • Thanks Sarah ..
      Hope you’ve really enjoyed it !!

      February 7, 2011 at 18:30

  11. True eyes speak a lot!! …but looks can be deceptive too. Hope judgements are not passed by this method 🙂 it could be an error of judgement!!

    February 6, 2011 at 15:55

    • yaa .. even I agree ..
      Sometimes .. they might b Lying 😛

      February 6, 2011 at 16:21

  12. nicely said!

    February 6, 2011 at 15:54

  13. Someone is Special

    an eye is the window to our soul.. You Haiku captured it so well.. Loved it.. Have a Haiku Sunday..

    Someone is Special

    February 6, 2011 at 15:31

    • Thanks for the appreciation Sir ..
      Even your Haiku is also something Brilliant ..

      February 6, 2011 at 15:36

      • Someone is Special

        Thanks Ashish.. I started loving your blog a lot..

        Someone is Special

        February 9, 2011 at 22:07

      • thanks for loving my blog !!

        February 9, 2011 at 22:38

  14. indeed, your eyes are windows to your soul. they speak so much unspoken words.

    http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/02/in-hindsight.html

    February 6, 2011 at 11:11

    • Thanks for the appreciation ..
      even your thoughts are brilliant

      February 6, 2011 at 15:05

  15. Oooo, that’s a good one Ashish! Really liked the message there. 🙂

    February 6, 2011 at 10:17

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