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Grumble (Day 13 of Haiku)

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Poor's Grumble

Poor's Grumble

Poor asks from God
to get Freedom from Slavery
of Ruthless Rich Slayers.

 

No Slavery

No Slavery

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This Haiku Post is a part of “ The Haiku Challenge “A 28 day Haiku Writing Competition,
organized by ‘Someone Is Special’.

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14 responses

  1. Loved your Haiku, you convey a lot..’Slavery’ – nice option

    Someone is Special

    February 16, 2011 at 08:46

  2. u brought up a good point 🙂 liked it!

    February 13, 2011 at 19:26

  3. Surely the rich had something to grumble about too…the ever dissatisfied lot!!

    February 13, 2011 at 17:40

  4. this is really beautiful ashish, hope it happens in reality too- its very much needed.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/11/grumble/

    February 13, 2011 at 12:10

    • thanks Trisha !!
      Your Haiku is even too good !!

      February 13, 2011 at 12:20

  5. Very poignant and gave direct meaning.

    February 13, 2011 at 10:24

  6. Slavery was not a grumble; it was an abomination, but good haiku anyway.

    February 13, 2011 at 08:49

    • But from Slumdogs’ Point of View .. It was !!

      February 13, 2011 at 08:55

  7. Creative bit. Mine is here:

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/h-ku-13-grumble/

    February 13, 2011 at 06:45

  8. love the image and the simplicity (and truth!) within the message. THANK YOU!

    February 13, 2011 at 05:30

  9. cool,
    remarkable reminder of slavery.

    February 13, 2011 at 01:31

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