Grumble (Day 13 of Haiku)
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Poor's Grumble
Poor asks from God
to get Freedom from Slavery
of Ruthless Rich Slayers.
No Slavery
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This Haiku Post is a part of “ The Haiku Challenge “ – A 28 day Haiku Writing Competition,
organized by ‘Someone Is Special’.
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Loved your Haiku, you convey a lot..’Slavery’ – nice option
Someone is Special
February 16, 2011 at 08:46
u brought up a good point 🙂 liked it!
February 13, 2011 at 19:26
Surely the rich had something to grumble about too…the ever dissatisfied lot!!
February 13, 2011 at 17:40
this is really beautiful ashish, hope it happens in reality too- its very much needed.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/11/grumble/
February 13, 2011 at 12:10
thanks Trisha !!
Your Haiku is even too good !!
February 13, 2011 at 12:20
Very poignant and gave direct meaning.
February 13, 2011 at 10:24
TY
February 13, 2011 at 10:31
Slavery was not a grumble; it was an abomination, but good haiku anyway.
February 13, 2011 at 08:49
But from Slumdogs’ Point of View .. It was !!
February 13, 2011 at 08:55
Creative bit. Mine is here:
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/h-ku-13-grumble/
February 13, 2011 at 06:45
love the image and the simplicity (and truth!) within the message. THANK YOU!
February 13, 2011 at 05:30
Thanks for appreciating !!
February 13, 2011 at 08:56
cool,
remarkable reminder of slavery.
February 13, 2011 at 01:31
Gee Thanks !!
February 13, 2011 at 08:58