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Ravel (Day 17 of Haiku)

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Life

Life

Mysterious Life
in the midst of Truth and Lies,
Destiny ravels.

Rights and Wrongs in Life

Rights and Wrongs in Life

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This Haiku Post is a part of “ The Haiku Challenge “A 28 day Haiku Writing Competition,
organized by ‘Someone Is Special’.

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13 responses

  1. Fay

    Yay! I love haiku.
    Destiny ravels. . . . perfect.

    February 21, 2011 at 23:17

  2. Wonderful Lines … I love it.

    February 21, 2011 at 18:32

  3. Glad that you started writing Haiku.. I am wordless Ashish..

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    Request wordpress to add these many stars..

    Someone is Special

    February 18, 2011 at 19:33

    • Thanks Sir .. Keep us motivating further with such contests 😉

      February 19, 2011 at 09:53

  4. Awesome…
    Loved the second line a lot…
    “In the midst of Truth and Lies”..I love it 🙂

    February 18, 2011 at 13:39

  5. destiny ravels, true.
    well done.

    February 18, 2011 at 01:29

  6. Very poignant Haiku! Outstanding

    February 18, 2011 at 00:15

  7. very true.

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/ravel/

    February 17, 2011 at 20:27

  8. If you figure out how to unravel life, you will be a big step up on 99% of the population. I haven’t a clue. Darn, now I think of clue. Unraveling a clue would have a better haiku than what I posted.

    February 17, 2011 at 12:09

  9. Destiny holds the true calling, if one shrugs the darkness. Good haiku!

    February 17, 2011 at 09:48

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