The Open Source of Hovering Ideas

Somewhat Common !!

You’re beautiful
… but strange …

You’re smart
… but still slow ..

You’re impatient
… but fast …

You’re tired
… but still last ..

You’re hot
… but still cold …

You’re established
… but not old ..

You’re a Lover
… but still alone ..

You’re a Loner
… but not unknown ..

You’re waiting
… but happy …

You’re leaving
… but staying …

You’re amazing
… but weird …

You’re yourself
… but still feared …

We both want to be
… A forever seen star….

I have to say
… a lot in common is what we are ..

Our Imaginations are unbound
… Keeping dreams too far …

Just always Be Proud
… for being what we are …

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Selected for :- Thursdays Poet Rally Week 43 By Jingle

Happy Rally !!!

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20 responses

  1. Well written, Love the word play, emotion and the originality used in sentence construction..!!

    August 31, 2011 at 08:47

  2. This is seriously good! loved it! 🙂

    June 9, 2011 at 20:44

  3. Loved it, beautifully balanced dichotomy that makes perfect sense. 🙂

    June 8, 2011 at 18:43

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  5. fun word flow.
    A++

    🙂

    May 10, 2011 at 23:50

  6. I agree very cool poem =)

    May 10, 2011 at 21:53

  7. great poem

    May 6, 2011 at 14:04

  8. Nice piece of Work

    May 6, 2011 at 00:08

  9. So many buts
    but that’s how life is.. loved the contrasting play of words.

    May 5, 2011 at 19:27

  10. nice…loved the flow

    May 5, 2011 at 17:42

  11. indeed am proud of being me 😛
    and a good one

    May 5, 2011 at 03:08

  12. Cool.

    May 4, 2011 at 13:38

  13. it seems like someone want to rationalize everything or just don’t want to be in too much “happy-state”,,
    🙂
    it’s for me,,
    thanks for sharing!

    May 4, 2011 at 09:49

  14. super cool write, thanks for sharing..

    A++

    May 4, 2011 at 08:43

    • Thanks for the appreciation Ji !!
      and even thanks for the grade as well !! 😉

      May 4, 2011 at 09:31

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