The Open Source of Hovering Ideas


What is right,
Is difficult to decide
But what is wrong
Is easy to point.
That which brings you joy,
And makes you smile
No doubt, is considered worth while.
Whatever has been used as ladder.
If it gives you the desired pleasure,
People call it the real treasure,
People think a little more
Is it the ecstasy you’re looking for?
Remember if the heart is pure,
You’ll get the bless for sure,
When the heart is content.
Just don’t bother with the comments

But what is wrong,
is realized after the time has gone
Then the man is left alone
With his negative all grown
Now to come out of the plight
Again, he has to think of right.
Believe it or not,
What clear is the inner sight
And you have the power to flight,
Every wrong will surely transform into right.


This post was a part of  Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 53

57 responses

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    April 17, 2012 at 09:51

  2. ‘what is realized after the time has gone’…..very true….good poem!

    March 25, 2012 at 12:55

  3. Yes! Excellent advice — “When the heart is content. Just don’t bother with the comments.”

    March 25, 2012 at 09:38

  4. So true, and I love the hope at the end.

    March 23, 2012 at 15:51

  5. Greetings,

    hope all is well,

    invite you to join poetry picnic today, simply share a relevant or a random piece, and enjoy!
    Happy Thanksgiving,
    Always, your presence is sunshine to us.
    Best Wishes!

    your talent rocks.

    November 22, 2011 at 08:15

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  7. does seem easier to find the negative than the positive, doesn’t it?

    my post for Purple Treehouse

    November 8, 2011 at 08:46

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    November 7, 2011 at 05:46

  9. Very nice… Simply put with greater meaning. 😀

    November 6, 2011 at 17:30

  10. This is an inspiring poem. I enjoyed the read and like the design on your blog. Very cool!

    November 6, 2011 at 07:13

  11. brilliant.
    well done.

    November 5, 2011 at 20:45

  12. kez

    beautifully put …not sure all wrongs become all right but we can but hope ! thanks for sharing x x

    November 4, 2011 at 03:35

  13. true words, we are forced to make decisions all the time.


    November 3, 2011 at 08:55

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  15. Kay Salady

    Excellent! Only we have the power to transform our lives and to make a change in the world around us by being the example of the change we wish to see in the world. Keep writing! Your friend, Kay Salady, Author

    October 16, 2011 at 13:46

  16. It is so true … you have described it in such a wonderful way.
    Well done,

    my entry:

    October 14, 2011 at 17:47

    • Thanks for stopping by fella !! 😉

      October 15, 2011 at 23:43

  17. Every wrong will surely transform into right….well said.

    October 14, 2011 at 14:24

  18. This is great, glad to see you shine.

    October 14, 2011 at 00:19

  19. if this is about the prompt, then i can see how when we look at our baby, we wonder what they will be like, what will bring them joy, and then, when they become adults, a whole new relationship.

    October 13, 2011 at 21:03

    • Yaa !! That’s a nice interpretation from you !! Thanks !! 😉

      October 15, 2011 at 23:29

  20. Interestingly enough this first reminded me of a Scottish song called Ye Jacobites by Name… Nicely written poem with a beautiful melody.

    October 13, 2011 at 19:26

    • Thanks for the acknowledgement !!! 😉

      October 15, 2011 at 23:29

  21. anjum wasim dar

    Great work-artistic and attractive-true expressions.

    October 13, 2011 at 00:19

  22. Hope 🙂

    October 11, 2011 at 07:41

  23. I do agree that the notion of wrong and right is very questionable. The power to transform is another nice idea. Strong poem!

    October 11, 2011 at 02:56

  24. Very well done, Ashish, I loved this. Your last three lines spell out the way for finding the “right” path.

    Here’s my posting for the rally:

    October 10, 2011 at 08:12

    • Thanks for your kind words …
      I’ve already seen your Poetry …
      It’s truly phenomenal as expected …

      October 10, 2011 at 18:05

      • How kind of you! 🙂

        October 12, 2011 at 20:06

      • My Pleasure !! 😉

        October 13, 2011 at 09:10

  25. Nice one. Clearly written with words of wisdom.


    October 9, 2011 at 02:01

  26. Great poem, the first 4 lines are particularly philosophical.

    Here is my entry:

    October 7, 2011 at 17:34

    • Well thanks for stopping by !!
      Yeah even your poetry was great !!!

      October 8, 2011 at 07:39

  27. Dilemma indeed!! 😀 lovely one dear…

    October 7, 2011 at 08:24

  28. kez

    Beautiful wish we could all soar ! thank you x

    October 6, 2011 at 22:47

  29. very well written!

    October 6, 2011 at 20:58

  30. good one ashbee! love it! this week’s gooseberry..

    October 5, 2011 at 13:51

    • Well Thanks for stopping by
      and loving this piece in my Post
      and even, Thanks for the share …

      October 5, 2011 at 19:55

  31. amazingly beautiful.

    Thanks for sharing.

    October 5, 2011 at 06:24

  32. Nicely done 🙂

    October 4, 2011 at 12:26

  33. This is really expressed so well and so nicely done thanks for sharing

    October 4, 2011 at 07:48

  34. deep and creative thoughts, love the word flow.

    Thanks for sharing.

    October 4, 2011 at 01:06

  35. The next time I learn a blog, I hope that it doesnt disappoint me as a lot as this one. I mean, I do know it was my choice to read, however I truly thought youd have something attention-grabbing to say. All I hear is a bunch of whining about something that you might fix should you werent too busy in search of attention.

    October 3, 2011 at 19:56

  36. Very well said and so true. Nicely done!

    October 3, 2011 at 19:37

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