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My Silly Shitty Hovering Mind .. From Darkness To Sunshine


Ain’t dreaming about
any moment or opportunity
to come and chase for,
Ain’t running towards
success and achievements
to brag myself more.
Even not begging for
some fame, priviledge,
money and blessings to pour,
And really, Don’t wanna
keep on dealing with
these Shits like a moron.

Maybe .. I’ve fallen
into the darkness,
Maybe .. I’m in the
centre of cynicists,
Maybe .. I feel like
an ”Indian Nigga”
who’s ignored sometimes
and even left behind.
or even, Maybe I’m
simply just another victim
of a Shithole Politics.

Despite of all
the Omens of my Life,
Let’s keep them
apart for a while,
Jumping out from
my pity graveyard,
Cutting down the tension
with a Sharp Knife,
as There does exists
my Time to “Shine”.

Just keep learning
from my past li’l mistakes
and moving on further miles long.
Ignore the Bullshit trash-talking
and keeping mind and soul Strong.
Just a Lonewolf
in this Dark Jungle
Dwelling a New Cult
against the Mean Cunts,
Raising Hell with
some Raw Attitude
Making an Optimistic Ego
more damn Blunt.

Someday I will
get what I wanted,
Someday I will
live on my dreams,
Someday I will
drive to the success,
Someday I will
travel across the seas,
Someday I will,
really grow up Damn BIG
Someday I will,
stop taking other’s Shit
Someday I will
get some God Damn reasons
to get rid all of my grieves.
Someday I will
be that one what
I’ve promised to anybody.
And This is the way how,
Someday I will
become a MAN of somebody
from a KID of nobody.


This Poetry is a part of  Thursday Poets Rally Week 64 by Jingle

Thursday Poets Rally Week 64

22 responses

  1. It was full of so many different emotions and I felt like I should have been sitting in a large dark room listening to a very talented person singing a soulful song full of life’s passions. It was wonderful to read. Be blessed.

    April 23, 2012 at 03:05

    • Aww… Thanks for the motivation !! 😉

      April 23, 2012 at 08:11

  2. Well done nice write.. 🙂

    April 17, 2012 at 20:23

  3. Nice rhythm. great passion. Good luck! You will!

    April 16, 2012 at 14:42

  4. I truly appreciate this post. I have been looking all over for this! Thank God I found it on Bing. You have made my day! Thanks again..

    April 11, 2012 at 02:19

  5. Slick poetry, full of passion and power. It really kept me reading. Great stuff!

    April 3, 2012 at 23:45

  6. ZQ

    Yikes! I could hear the rhythms, bass, and leads.

    March 27, 2012 at 23:19

    • Thanks a lot Sir, for stopping by

      March 29, 2012 at 08:26

  7. Love this! How I feel right now.. I’ll get on my path again someday

    March 25, 2012 at 20:49

  8. The intensity of dreams is a beacon down the road– nice write.

    March 25, 2012 at 18:20

  9. Stark. Hard. Vivid. And I totally feel this. Glad I had to opportunity to read.

    March 25, 2012 at 11:39

    • Ohh .. So Sweet of you .. Thanks !!

      March 25, 2012 at 11:40

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  11. SiNA

    interesting expressions…

    March 25, 2012 at 11:21

    • Glad You Liked it 😉

      March 25, 2012 at 11:22

      • SiNA

        : )

        March 25, 2012 at 12:06

  12. Pity graveyard…that is brillant!
    This is a great piece of writing that so many can identify with.

    March 24, 2012 at 16:42

  13. Someday you will.

    I really like this; stark and I can very much relate. Nicely written.

    March 23, 2012 at 15:50

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