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… GRIEF …

Yo!! Every day and night
I always keep on Dreaming,
Just to hide the damn fact
Which I don’t want to believe in,
I can’t take this anymore
Coz’ those tears are still bleeding,
Since those days won’t be cumin’ back
So It’s Damn f*cking useless for a pleading.

Since I m not a Waving flag
I m not that damn stronger,
Getting tamed by almost everybody
Can’t take it anymore so longer,
So, I Need a break from such Hell sh*ts
As such things won’t get over,
And finding an another place like Heaven
Coz’ it’s the only damn place to Hover.

Those nice days reminds me so much,
Which even comes in your life very hardly,
But soon, The Tables turned out-of-nowhere
Where I’ve lost somebody very badly,
Now It’s late to have remorse & regrets
Coz’ the time has already gone out for a guilty,
Still on a trail to find them out
So much Truly, Madly and Deeply.

So while walking though those sufferings
Still hanging on with a self belief,
That all those Dreams gonna be true someday
Surely get back those senses of relief,
But Damn It !! This won’t hide the f*cking reality
and There’s no way I won’t deceive
Coz’ I’ve lost my dear loved ones in the middle,
and That’s THE BIGGEST GRIEF that I’ve ever received !!

Still having a Dream every time I wake
Though the clock yelling me out that ‘It’s too much late’
Battling from those Nightmares, My life is now in stake
Just making some new roads of my very dear Fate !!

Though these Roads are very tough to move on
Even its surface are very hard,
But there is no way I m gonna give up like a Moron
Not anymore in my own Yard.
Those my loved might have gone to infinite
Dunno how much they are far apart
But still there’s a place for them
& forever they reside in his HOLY HEART !!

The GRIEF Still and Forever Resides Inside The Depths of my HEART

The GRIEF Still and Forever Resides Inside The Depths of my HEART

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61 responses

  1. powerful and smart lines,

    Thanks for sharing.
    🙂

    November 10, 2011 at 00:44

  2. As always, brilliant! Anybody who can use the word “moron” in a poem/song is fine by me *wink* There are so many different ways of reading this; a poem, a song, a rap, or a story, and to be able to cross so many genres takes true talent. I’m constantly amazed by your abilities.

    November 8, 2011 at 22:40

  3. I could hear a rap rhythm while I studied your writing. Nicely done – captures grief intensely.

    November 5, 2011 at 08:43

    • Ya That’s true … Rap-cum-Poetry !!!

      November 5, 2011 at 08:45

  4. Hmm… it’s like a reading the lyrics of a song. your poem is clothed with strong, strong feelings.

    November 3, 2011 at 13:29

    • Ya most of people have already given the same opinion .. Welcome to the Club !! 😛

      November 5, 2011 at 08:43

  5. no one likes these kinds of mornings – Though the clock yelling me out that ‘It’s too much late’
    Battling from those Nightmares,

    November 3, 2011 at 05:10

  6. powerful.

    🙂

    November 3, 2011 at 03:31

  7. This is full of angst. It would make a good rock song, I think! 🙂

    February 2, 2011 at 16:50

  8. the imagery is romantic and beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing…

    A++

    February 1, 2011 at 21:59

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  12. seriously that’s something very good poetry …
    simply the BEST !!

    November 5, 2010 at 09:46

  13. danroberson

    Definitely said with feeling and depth. Your fire burns bright. I enjoyed the read.

    October 30, 2010 at 05:54

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  15. felt every word as if its my own…. Cheers!!!

    October 26, 2010 at 22:14

  16. I know you did amazing job, still, give you reminder:

    #1: return favor to those who are here, but you did not visit yet.
    #2: I did give you award notification, let me know if you post them by commenting under my post.

    Thanks …
    I value your input.
    Happy Tuesday!

    October 26, 2010 at 20:08

  17. A.B. Thomas

    A slick and passionate write – a cool read, thanks!

    October 26, 2010 at 06:49

  18. Powerful, very powerful–a rhythmic delight, a deep, multi-layered bit of writing with a great flow. Fine work!

    October 25, 2010 at 09:19

  19. jgrow2

    Please keep going, keep writing. I can hear the rhythm–a few different ones, actually. Well done!

    October 24, 2010 at 21:52

    • Gee Thanks ..
      Y’all just keep on appreciating ..
      so that i keep on Movin’, Rappin’ and Rollin’ baby !! 😛

      October 24, 2010 at 22:38

  20. Wow, that was a great poem. My first thought was that it would be a great song.

    October 24, 2010 at 20:45

    • LOL .. yaa .. ur not the 1 my friend
      everybody wants this as a SONG

      Will work on its composition in FUTURE 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 22:37

  21. Faith and love are strong in this work.

    JP

    October 24, 2010 at 19:55

    • Exactly .. Appreciated the FACT what u’ve said 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 22:36

  22. Very well written Ash Dear.. I love reading such dark and deep ones.. really, Life has not been very good to most of us!! The rest of us read and exclaim such poetic talent!! They fail to appreciate that we breathe each moment in us what is a “beautiful poetry” for them..
    Glad you stopped by at my site and that we linked.. All the very Best Ash.. Here on- you have me..xxxxx

    October 24, 2010 at 19:31

    • Okies .. You’ve got me .. I’ve got you .. Doesn’t matter 😛
      the FACT is .. we are getting connected through such posts 😉

      n’ thanks for the appreciation ^_^

      October 24, 2010 at 22:35

  23. Wow, awesome! I can imagine a guy rapping this out.
    Rap is actually surprisingly expressive, and you’ve captured a driving sense of anger with the whole thing. 🙂
    Over&out,
    ~fireandice

    October 24, 2010 at 18:58

    • Well, thanks for recognizing me 😛
      You’ll get to know more abt. me soon 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 22:33

  24. Wonderful flow of the poem, great work!=D~

    October 24, 2010 at 13:13

    • Gee Thanks ^_^
      Ur Poetry was BRILLIANT as well 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 13:29

  25. Whoa! Dark, and deep.. I think I concur with Bodhi Rose.. you can easily put this to tune and get a hit single! 🙂

    Thanks for stopping by at my Rally entry, Ashbee..!

    October 24, 2010 at 11:54

    • Gee Thanks ^_^
      Ur Poetry was damn BRILLIANT as well 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 13:30

  26. Very nice eloborate commentry on grief, full of words and enthusiasm.
    You have tremendous talent for poetry as well.
    Nourish it shrewedly, besides balancing the studies too dude.
    Happy to have on my site.
    Enjoyed the youthfulness.
    Have a happy rally.

    October 24, 2010 at 10:13

    • Thanks sir .. appreciate you for that as well 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 10:26

  27. Thank you Guys for such compliments .. well appreciate
    Please Rate some STARS to my Poetry-cum-Rap ..
    Moreover, visit some of my other Published Posts
    hope Y’all like them like Y’all liked my GRIEF ^_^

    !! toodles !!

    October 24, 2010 at 09:50

  28. Very emotional, and layered, just like grief itself.

    http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/10/11/sexy/

    October 24, 2010 at 09:37

    • TY..
      BTW .. ur Blog is good as well !!

      October 24, 2010 at 09:43

  29. nice! i wish i could hear the music version of this…

    October 24, 2010 at 09:12

    • woah .. You too demanding for same
      Seems like everybody wants its musical composition… COOL
      will work upon it in FUTURE …
      n’ THANK YOU for the appreciation 😉

      October 24, 2010 at 09:18

  30. Sorry it liked you to my other blog. My poem is here http://suzicatepoetry.wordpress.com/

    October 24, 2010 at 06:12

  31. You touched the cornerstone of grief. Heartfelt, but never give up.

    October 24, 2010 at 06:10

    • Gee thanks for the appreciation …
      Will work upon on some more poetry and gonna upload’em soon…

      !! Thanks again !!

      October 24, 2010 at 07:35

    • It’s OK ..
      I wud definitely visit there at your BLOG … 😉

      !! and Thanks for the appreciation !!

      October 24, 2010 at 07:36

  32. Great. Good rythmn and love the image you used. This could be set to music I think.
    Victoria

    October 24, 2010 at 03:03

    • Gee thanks for the appreciation …
      Well, even i feel sometimes that i need a composer for my song… 😉 😛

      !! Thanks again !!

      October 24, 2010 at 07:33

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  34. A lot of emotion flowing there–I felt it. Happy to know that in spite of the grief of losing loved ones they still remain in the “holy heart”…

    Why don’t you put this to music and become the next Limp Bizkit!

    October 24, 2010 at 01:18

    • HaaHaa ROFL ….Well, It’s a nice idea ..
      Even I dream to be a part of LB every day
      But But, Let’s get DOWN 2 EARTH now !! 😛

      NEwez … U got those lines easily .. gr8
      !! Thanks for the appreciation !!

      October 24, 2010 at 07:40

      • Wow, it seems l’m not the only one thinking this could be put to music!

        Hey, why not you becoming the next LB–sure you could. Good luck with that! 😉

        October 24, 2010 at 10:02

      • Seems like …
        Now I have to call FRED DURST of LIMP BIZKIT for that ;P

        October 24, 2010 at 10:37

  35. feel free to explore participants list,
    let me know after you have posted a minimum 18 comments..

    Happy Rally.

    October 23, 2010 at 23:47

    • Done ..
      comments to 18 poetries of different poets around the world ..
      and i accept all the conditions for The Agreement 4 Thursday Poets Rally Week 31 as follows
      my answers are ‘YES’ on ur given questions …

      honestly, m a newbie at here. dunno have much idea abt. it.
      please notify me whether my poem got nominated or even got any award for that
      i’ll be thankful to u ..

      !! HAPPY RALLY !!

      October 24, 2010 at 07:57

  36. Since I m not a Waving flag
    I m not that damn stronger,
    Getting tamed by almost everybody
    Can’t take it anymore so longer,

    love these,
    well done.

    October 23, 2010 at 23:46

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  38. Charneet

    vry tuchin..!!
    gr8 !!

    September 27, 2010 at 19:56

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